Thoughts on which words to use (and not), what makes a sex scene good (at least for this author), and tips on how to get yourself to actually sit down and write one.
Such a great topic to share with us, Donna, and that you re-examined your own work (with annotations!) is the best. I will never read about the heaving of chests and not think of you!
Oh wow! Thank you! I appreciated reading your tips about the matter. I never really thought about how to write about sex artfully, I think I just describe what happened haha
Such a great topic to share with us, Donna, and that you re-examined your own work (with annotations!) is the best. I will never read about the heaving of chests and not think of you!
So glad you enjoyed this, and particularly the annotated sex scenes! I had fun doing those. Honored to thought of while bosoms are heaving.
Oh wow! Thank you! I appreciated reading your tips about the matter. I never really thought about how to write about sex artfully, I think I just describe what happened haha
lol.
Loved this! And your comments are hilarious, it made me laugh a lot!
I'm glad you laughed! Cheryl, I thought of you when I was writing this. You are very good at sex scenes yourself!!!
Love this!! And these annotated excerpts are EVERYTHING!!!
Now you need to annotate your own sex scenes in THE WRITING RETREAT. LOL. (We seriously need to plan something about writing and sex!!!)
The fact that you annotated HAHAHA I LOVE YOU!!! - me, heaving
I love you too. LOL.